Hey, that was pretty good. I had to read it a few times to get the meaning.. I got kinda confused once you started bringing in the little girl, but generally I like it a lot!

thank you for your comments :) I personally love this poem, i beilve its my favorite or at least the top 3 of favorites. Its sad how sometimes we can blow off the misfourtante and not even reilze that they are people too. They all had families at one point in their lives. Once I took a picture of a homeless man sleeping on the sidewalk. Mind you I had it in my mind that all homeless were drunks and bums and didnt' deserve the sidewalk they lay on. So I took the picture to be a B(i)tch, then when i got home i could swear you could see sadness emeanting from around him. I started to change my mind after that. They are people too, and people need to reilze that.

Hey i really liked this poem very vivid i always love when a poem paints a picture in my head. Great work!

thank you everyone :)