So she walked to the street
Between the line of day and night
And the stranger girl stood there
Feared in her own fright
^^I love that part

I love the whole poem great job seriously! keep it up i wanna see more poems!

Love, Taylor

Such a beautiful poem, you have such a nice style of writing, i've enjoyed reading all 4 of these poems of yours. Keep it up.

Write some more, i would love to read em'

xx- Kalah