This is a powerful love poem in an atypical fashion... the passion of love mixed with different roads taken and conflicting unions. Being torn in two directions, by two loves, is a terrible, hungry quandary. As I said in comments on another of your poems... bon chance.

Great job here! I think everyone can relate to this in a way. I know i can! you are and awsome poet keep it up!

I loved this poem I have been there before.

hey great poem keep m coming