Contemplation

never read anything of that stature b4 , but it was good

Hey this poem was so awesome i would give it a 100 but they dont have it on the rating scale so its a 5+++ lol <3, dayna

That was very interesting..not a style i've seen before..i'm not sure how i feel about poems structured like this....i get kinda old school about it..but i like your energy..

by the by, in that poetry game where each person has to write a poem specifed by the person above. I wrote astral projection and you seemed to know quite a lot about it? Have you been flying?

I'd love to chat about it if you have...please leave a comment on one of my poems bout your nightime escapades.

Respects.

This is seriously good. I liked how you used a wide variety of vocabulary because most poetry that's usually written on here doesn't possess any of that.

GREAT JOB, i really really really really liked that one. great use of words, u are so talented, great job