WOW!
Powerful!
amazing!
great style!
keep it up!!
great work, luv elizabeth

I love how you put this together. It's dark, grim, and wonderfully snide. Great poem!

Once again another awsome write! This is a kool way of putting a poem together, i havn't seen one quit like this, congrats! Keep it up!

Marie

Wow...i rly lyke it...i'm amazed of how well u noe ur vocab...i'm bad at knowing meanings to words lyke that...but i figured it out...keep writing...ur so good at it! And plz read all of my poems n tell me wut u think...thx so much! Much Luv, .:.Amy K.:.

great poem! the wording is excellent and so are the rhymes, keep it up!

GREAT JOB, i really really really really liked that one. great use of words, u are so talented, great job

This is seriously good. I liked how you used a wide variety of vocabulary because most poetry that's usually written on here doesn't possess any of that.

That was very interesting..not a style i've seen before..i'm not sure how i feel about poems structured like this....i get kinda old school about it..but i like your energy..

by the by, in that poetry game where each person has to write a poem specifed by the person above. I wrote astral projection and you seemed to know quite a lot about it? Have you been flying?

I'd love to chat about it if you have...please leave a comment on one of my poems bout your nightime escapades.

Respects.

Hey this poem was so awesome i would give it a 100 but they dont have it on the rating scale so its a 5+++ lol <3, dayna

never read anything of that stature b4 , but it was good