by Shædow Poet Nov 11, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Waste away my soul has dried |
wow...captures the emotions very well |
by Amilo
Well I like the first few stanzas, but after that your captivation rusted a bit. I felt like you could remove a random stanza in the poem and it would've still made sense and flowed just as well. And it starts out in vivid, poetic stanzas, but ends differently. But great job, still. |
Alas, my soul is still bleeding |
This one is really great! Powerful words. |
by ZenZi
I like the way it ends "Perfectly" I wish I was able to write like you! |