Dried Soul, Invisible Love.

by Shædow Poet   Nov 11, 2004


Waste away my soul has dried
Peel the pain off my layering skin
Clear the turmoil flowing inside
Give me back my immortal sin.

Infuse me with some happiness
Hush away the revolving disgust
Rid me of this sudden sadness
For my sanity is a living must.

Come back, shine, and smile at me
Hold my hand and walk as one
Leave my body painless, free
See me like I am someone.

Alas, my soul is still bleeding
The pain is still coating
Happiness is what I am still needing
I am still consumed, emotionally dying.

Invisible like an altering breeze
Unseen by your crystal vision
Come now and rescue me,
Let me out of this poignant prison.

Staring at you walk away
You never heard me shouting out
Never heard three words I had to say
Never cared for me, never helped.

Goodbye then, if you must leave
I know you never noticed me
My cries, I sent me heart, you never received
Invisible was I, never did you see.

F*(c)k my heart’s needing
It’s broken to never again mend
Forget about all my bleeding
I am only invisible in the end.

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  • 19 years ago

    by insane authority

    wow...captures the emotions very well
    :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    Well I like the first few stanzas, but after that your captivation rusted a bit. I felt like you could remove a random stanza in the poem and it would've still made sense and flowed just as well. And it starts out in vivid, poetic stanzas, but ends differently. But great job, still.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Alas, my soul is still bleeding
    The pain is still coating
    Happiness is what I am still needing
    I am still consumed, emotionally dying.

    ..By far my favourite verse. This poem is amazing. So much emotion. I love it.
    Take care of yourself.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Atahan Tolunay

    This one is really great! Powerful words.
    Cheers

  • 20 years ago

    by ZenZi

    I like the way it ends "Perfectly" I wish I was able to write like you!