You are so talented. Great job. I really love this poem.

I like the way it ends "Perfectly" I wish I was able to write like you!

This one is really great! Powerful words.
Cheers

Alas, my soul is still bleeding
The pain is still coating
Happiness is what I am still needing
I am still consumed, emotionally dying.

..By far my favourite verse. This poem is amazing. So much emotion. I love it.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

Well I like the first few stanzas, but after that your captivation rusted a bit. I felt like you could remove a random stanza in the poem and it would've still made sense and flowed just as well. And it starts out in vivid, poetic stanzas, but ends differently. But great job, still.

wow...captures the emotions very well
:)