The beauty in this poem was just clearly apparent... I think you did an excellent job here... the words were not too fancy and hard to comprehend like a couple of your other works for people like me.. (no offense meant :)) .. and the ending was magical and dark... "..eternal rest" I loved that line..

...yet again, thanks for your comment on my poem...

That was good! Pretty sweet! Read some of my stuff if you ever get a chance.

A thoroughly brilliant write. I lost myself in the words so easily and the imagery was so clear and felt real.