Wow, that poem was excellent. It was so right on about how I feel. Great job.

hey, i can see how your feeling and i like how you put your pain onto paper. an i liked how you asked yourself the question of sanity, much meaning in that.

ya so, i wanted to congradulate you on commenting on that girl 'marias' poem...lets face it...shes horrible. im sorry i kno it sounds rude but, she is, and a 13 year old should definetly not write things like a THAT! but ya, your like the only other one with the guts to say how bad she is... (have u read her resent 'poem'?...i laigh when i say poem...)

well anyways, like your poem, good job

so young so much pain,
you have all your life to gain.
live your life don't let it drain.
look how beautiful you write,
that's so far away from insane.