really good.i tend to ponder the same sometimes.polly xxx

Excellent poem! My response to your issue with faith is that we don't come by it on our own; it is a gift from God. Perhaps He will give you faith if you ask.

That was such a thought-provoking poem. It makes you think, and it was still written in a nice, flowing kind of pattern. Great job, and good luck.
~Jaime

I LIKE THIS SIMALR TO MY STYLE OF WRITING. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Very... wow. I very much liked this poem. :) You write very well. Keep up the good work!

~~Spanish367

Amazing poem, I love it. The rhyming and the words were all great. You have a true talent.

---Ashley

Wow it was so amazing and moving i love ur work its excellent

Hey,
I so love this poem, I think this is your best from what i've read, the flow is perfect as well the rhyming, and it has a good ending too!
kisses stephanie

Hey great poem! I know how you feel sometimes i wonder if god is really ther especially through the bad times but then i look around me and see all the wounderful things he has made keep praying and mabey God will show you the same thing

*anna*