Every line is a paramount obsession!!

I tell you, I drooled as I read this! Such a Delicious and WELL-SAID poem. Absolutly Gorgeous. Never stop writing when you have talent like yours...oh please dont stop!

God Bless you! ;)

[take care, and if you ever need to chat e-mail me: dubbs1779@yahoo.com]

i love your work love ur talent,god ur stuff is 100% sheer class..keep writing,i`ll keep reading BIG 5

ok you are deff. the best writer ever. oh my god i love every word of it. maybe we can talk sometime...xox
alyssa
Ps I hope these poems arnt true hunni

that was beautiful

that was an excellent poem! it was very touching and its one of the better ones ive read! goodjob keep it up!
~*lindz*~

not your best. it started out being about the girl and ended up differently and sort of confusing. it could have been a bit more explained. i think it just needs more added to it. its very well done for what it is though.
~Freal~

That is a wicked twist at the end I totally didnt see it coming, Awesome job 5/5

This poem is amazing.... another great poem... your poetry just grabs my attention so easily and not many people can do that... i love your work keep it up

Maddy

hey thnx for the comment on my poem this was brilliant but so sad i iked it hope u ok jessxxxxx

5/5. i love it.

Can these poems get any better?
Shows how the girl with everything secretly has nothing.
5/5
All my love
-Emma

Wow I really love your poems there really good..

I liked the beggining best, good work :)

pili

EXCELLENT

Though I must admit I did get confused. Yet, as someone said it is a taste of heaven to read every single tasty line that you make. Keep going ^^

Good poem I like it

THIS POEM NEARLY MADE ME CRY ITS DA WHOLE FACT OF 9/11 IS A DELICATE STORY XXXXXXXXXXXXX

This is a really good poem 5/5

This was such a sad heartfelt write.
The imageery you create with ypur rhymes are outa this world...

Omg ! this nearly made me cry, i wish i could write like yooh!

iv'e read 3 of ur poems so far and there by far the best iv'e seen x

Well done xxx

Loved it 5/5 keep it up