Nice :) I can imagine everything you describe, so vivid. And it has a thoughtful meaning to it... good work.

yo, i liked the storylike element and the general tone of the piece. 'Societal' is a funny word, ill have to try it out sometime....

yo, i liked the storylike element and the general tone of the piece. 'Societal' is a funny word, ill have to try it out sometime....

Great job...Just wanted to let you know You are on my favorites ...I will be reading more and looking for new ones....