Bow down

by Rachael/7MidniteTears   Nov 12, 2004


Someone, someone
kill me please
save me from
this horrid disease

the pain is unbarable
its all kept inside
its like an ocean
it comes tide after tide

i wish everday
that the pain will disapper
but it comes again
rite after i shed tears

my soul has turned dark
as hard as a stone
the devil has won
my soul i had loaned

i lay here in hell
i take my seat
i look at the devil
and bow at his feet

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  • 20 years ago

    by Dieing

    Beautiful poem keep up the awsome work

  • 20 years ago

    by Rachael/7MidniteTears

    goldentear, that was beautiful

  • 20 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Nice poem.

  • 20 years ago

    by Allen

    Just like Andrea said, great poem :) Flows and rhymes so perfectly, it really gets the emotion across :) ...hmm... but don't "bow down" girl, be strong and believe in yourself :) keep up the good work and take care :) ...oh yeah, I noticed your little advertising for Cody and her on you, its really cute :D

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem!

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