great poem!

Just like Andrea said, great poem :) Flows and rhymes so perfectly, it really gets the emotion across :) ...hmm... but don't "bow down" girl, be strong and believe in yourself :) keep up the good work and take care :) ...oh yeah, I noticed your little advertising for Cody and her on you, its really cute :D

Nice poem.

goldentear, that was beautiful

Beautiful poem keep up the awsome work