You Know What I Hate?

by Luvmeluvr   Nov 12, 2004


You know what I hate
At the start of each day?
That I'm still alive
And not dead where I lay.

You know what I hate
At the end of each night?
That I keep on breathing
And I'm still in the fight.

You know what I hate
About people like you?
Around people like me
You don't know what to do.

You know what I hate
About everyone else?
They're all so caught up
With no one but themselves.

There's no time to care
About people like me
Til we end our lives
And we force you to see.

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  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    excellent poem! i liked this one a lot. the flow was very nice, the content was something i could relate to. sad but beautifully written. i enjoyed it. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    This is awesome! Happy Holidays.

  • 19 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    This really is an incredibly poignant poem. I wish it weren't, though. Regardless, great poem... nicely defiant anthem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    That was a good poem. very ture, its seems like ppl are pushed to the background great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    excellent poem, so true, it sucks. keep up the writing and check mine out if you have the chance

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