awww thats so sad, but still great, i luv ur work, keep it up and keep fightin hun :)

Wonderful poem, so sad the way people are ...I hate people like that too :) Love, Tori* Keep writing!

great poem, its very true. i like the pattern of this too. how u started each stanza with a question.

another great work!! you rock keep it up!

Marie

I love this one- it really means something to me coz i feel the same way! Keep it up! *5

-Luv KT

sad poem... very well written... hope u pass by mine sometimes... thanx ciao

excellent poem, so true, it sucks. keep up the writing and check mine out if you have the chance

That was a good poem. very ture, its seems like ppl are pushed to the background great job

This really is an incredibly poignant poem. I wish it weren't, though. Regardless, great poem... nicely defiant anthem.

This is awesome! Happy Holidays.

excellent poem! i liked this one a lot. the flow was very nice, the content was something i could relate to. sad but beautifully written. i enjoyed it. take care:)