by PAUL HEWSON Nov 12, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
I saw hate in your eyes, you despised and you cried |
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow...I loved the line: |
heya, good piece... you expressed the frustration and desparation of needing to make your words heard very well.. i keep reading it over and over lol, the endings pretty cool too :) arrgh cant she see you looove her!?? GOD! a very powerful poem, well done:)beanxx |
Very touching, cyber love never worked out for me. But I hope you meet who you love and that person isn't a liar. |
by Lipton
Awww... so sweet. Wonderful write! |