Awww... so sweet. Wonderful write!

~Lipton

Very touching, cyber love never worked out for me. But I hope you meet who you love and that person isn't a liar.
Good job 5/5

heya, good piece... you expressed the frustration and desparation of needing to make your words heard very well.. i keep reading it over and over lol, the endings pretty cool too :) arrgh cant she see you looove her!?? GOD! a very powerful poem, well done:)beanxx

Wow...I loved the line:
"I will take you to places you can easily hide"

Just wow...beautifully written~Holly