by Daniel Mulvany Nov 12, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
His hands so tightly grip her as she stumbles to the ground. |
Full of emotion.. as usual... great work! |
Wow, this was very emotional it brought a tear to my eye!! I hope this isnt a true life story!!! But you did an extrodinary job!! I couldnt change a thing, your a very talented writer!! 6/5!! WONDERFUL!! |
by Natalie
Aw wow, This was sad. But really good though. Maybe if you turned it into stanza's it might be easyier to follow, But that's just me, But other then that. I loved it 5/5 |
by Kay
hey babe! i havent read your poems in a while so i have to catch up here. but this one is so good. your a great writer and i love your poems. keep it up! love ya! 5/5 |