hey babe! i havent read your poems in a while so i have to catch up here. but this one is so good. your a great writer and i love your poems. keep it up! love ya! 5/5
~Kay~

Aw wow, This was sad. But really good though. Maybe if you turned it into stanza's it might be easyier to follow, But that's just me, But other then that. I loved it 5/5

`natalie x-x

Wow, this was very emotional it brought a tear to my eye!! I hope this isnt a true life story!!! But you did an extrodinary job!! I couldnt change a thing, your a very talented writer!! 6/5!! WONDERFUL!!

Full of emotion.. as usual... great work!