wow...this was excellent! love it!

wow great poem! was really good, glad i read it!

Excellent poem, people are truly disturbed, unfortuanetly it is most of the male population. Keep up the good writing... P.s. thanks for the comment

yes, that is quites t in the best way possible, another great peice jacki, i especially loved the twist, quites unexpected.
Julie
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Awsome- Great talent- Very moving 5/5

-Luv KT

Nope this poem is not true at all, just a dark twisted figure of my own imagination

its sad that society has come to males and even females to do things like that to anoher person..i kno how it feels to be raped and i show great sorrow for u....this poem is really good

p.s. pls red n comment on my poem ''only these eyes'' in profanity
thanks

I'm glad that this is not true, but it's terrible how somewhere, this is reality for someone. I loved your poem, great work.

Thanks everyone so much for all your comments :)

Thank You everone!

wow, this poem was truley, amazing, gave me chills...keep writing, you have so much talent.
xox
Samz~*~