by LostInLife! Nov 12, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I remember you walking by, |
by Lisa
Such a sad poem, but In a way i understand your feelings, my grandpa is in the hospital right now, Don't know how much longer he'll be here... good poem though, (5) |
by Tigger
Realy good poem, i know the feeling's you have shown in your poem, i hope to see m ore great poems |
by Kia
Good poem, i know how ya feel my grandaddy died this year i wrote two poems for him and one of them they read at his funeral. Death SUX |
by SHYSTY23KO
wow, thats sad :( I'm sorry he got taken away :( Good job of turning it into a poem, you did a great job! |
by Marie
sweet! that is a really good poem.. in the next to last line should it be that??? keep it up! |