sweet! that is a really good poem.. in the next to last line should it be that??? keep it up!

Marie

wow, thats sad :( I'm sorry he got taken away :( Good job of turning it into a poem, you did a great job!

Good poem, i know how ya feel my grandaddy died this year i wrote two poems for him and one of them they read at his funeral. Death SUX

Realy good poem, i know the feeling's you have shown in your poem, i hope to see m ore great poems

~*~ Tigger ~*~

Such a sad poem, but In a way i understand your feelings, my grandpa is in the hospital right now, Don't know how much longer he'll be here... good poem though, (5)