you said my poem was a wow...no this poem is a WOW WOW lol. I couldnt' stop reading it. The descrptions were very detailed. I had great visuals while reading it. What a dark picture you painted here. Sad how these things really do happen though. Anyways I couldn't give you anything less than a 5 because it really does deserve highter than that though. GREAT JOB!

wonderful poem, excellent wording, it paints a horrible picture in my head, many guys are that disturbed, I hate society... Keep writing so I can keep reading

This is so great...Hope it's not true though...Keep writing!

Great Poem I love it! it's really sad and horrible but mystifying at the same time keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I'm a little speechless. The imagery is so vivid for the brutality mentioned, but it wouldn't work without it. Just.. well amazing. Don't ever stop writing.

Omg....that is so incredibly sad...I could picture all of it, which is scary....amazing job Andrea...Loved it a lot...take good care xxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Insanely good Andrea. I could see it all in my head as I was reading it and am amazed how perfect the descriptions and everything is. Great job.

Lance

omg :o( that is sooo sad...but you wrote it very well..keep up the awesome writting^_^ 5/5

omg that was SOOO SAD, yet SOOO BRILLIANT!!! well done girl, u write so well, keep it up

another good one girl, dont forget to write to me!

That was so sad *tear* and wonderful too.

Amazingly written, amazing tale, amazing poet, amazingly sad, and amazingly true in the world today.

Holy cow...that is a crazy poem! It is very well written though. Great work. Dark and morbid. Gave me the creeps.

Wow. That is so sad! Is it true? That is horrible that there is some one out there like him. I'm really sorry about her if it is true. I'm thinking it is because the writing is so great. Thats nice to write a poem in her memory. Very greatly written! definatly a 5!

Wow is the only word that sums tis poem up, gave me chills reading it your an awesome writer

i'd give it a 10' if i could...sigh i guess a 5 will have to do. great writing
love blarg

p.s. thanx for all your comments on my poems!! i really appreciate it!!

Very good poem. Although I don't prefer the bad guy getting away. I like the happy endings. haha Anyways it was an awesome poem. Take care.
-Conner

that was written very well, andrea...but its a little disturbing and morbid...but it kept me glued to the screen with every line...great job !!!!!!!!! i could picture everything..

this is a great, sad, disturbing, true poem. I mean ugh. just one word can say it. Amazing

i love it...but i hope it isn't true.

luv ya lots,
*autumn*