That was a lovely poem, very powerful. I enjoyed it. Keep writing!! |
by Shædow Poet
Sad that the narrative in this poem was so aggrivated over a boy, they led to cutting... but yes, it does happen. I know a friend who almost killed themself through love. Good poem, no, great poem. |
by BabyGurl
ALL the poems you have told me to read i have loved and i am speachless WOW |
by Leah20
This poem is okay, it would be so much better if you used proper grammar, keep writing |