Its really sad how if we don't conform into what society likes and wants they judge use. They make our life hell. :( And parents jeeze they really should encourage everything a child does i quite school and my parents still encouraged me to do something with my life never mentioned i would be a looser or anything like that. Well I ended up in the navy w/out my highschool diploma and better off than half the people i would have graduated with. So yeah as you said "whos the fool" I really liked this poem because I could relate to it : Great Job gave u a 5

WOAH..another great GREAT poem!! You really know how to put everything together!! it had awesome flow!! and a great subject! totally can relate!! keep it up!!
liz

Whoa, an excellent poem! I loved it! It was so good. Thanks for you the comment. Take care and keep writing!

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Nice. I liked it. It gave me some wierd laidback feeling...though I still liked it.

wow very nice .. well written i enjoyed it .. great job

Very well written. I liked this poem alot.

I love this, I can really relate this to my life (apart from the disowning part).

Thanks for commenting on my poem, you know who you are.

excellent poem!

I like it. blunt but true. Go for it!
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