Wow! beautiful poem, Holly! I love how you build the story along with the song! Awesome concept and wonderfully accomplished! |
by Timothy r
Hey Holly, I love how you conjure up images of lost love and rememberances( sp.?) I loved this poem ..cant wait for the next one..Tim |
by Lexi Lou
awesome! i loved it! you have true talent! keep in touch! |
excellent poem, please, keep writing, I'd like to read more |
by Gemma Sinead Hayward
great poem Holly! i love the whole notion of the song and everything, and i love the line "the calm before the storm" i think it encaptures the whole feel realy. Excellant! |
by Tyler
This Poem Was awesome... descriptive and still kep a steady flow... |
by Jennie
I love this poem so much! It's wonderfully sad...it's like an old lady remembering her most beautiful days. (lol. of course i'm not saying that you're an old lady.) |