Omg...what are you talking about, i love this poem....especially love this verse:

"My spirit is bounded
In a world so cold,
Until you find it
And bring it home."

Beautiful...love it xxxxxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCareBabexx
<3

thanks Sarah,
you take care too...
-UnImportant

okay so i guess im not that hell bent...........im gunna give up on the comment writing for one day...lol the verses of your poetry flow perfectlyt and the ones u say are crappy are NEVER EVER crappy!! they are always awsome!!