by Briana. Nov 12, 2004
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The park bench was deserted |
by NaTashaSwift
Bri!! Your poem is sooo effing amazing!!! It made me cry!!! OMG Your an amazing writter!! You should publish your work!! Anyways I gotta go...talk to you on MSN...bffl! |
by BryannaR
hey Bree, your poem was inspiring and touching!!Isnt it amazing what you and me can do at our age!!i think younger people have more things to express and your peom was the bomb keep it up! ill talk to you on msn |
OMG i have tears in my eyes this poem is so beautiful. God Blessed you sweety with a gift. This poem is amazing to be able to understand true sight at ur age (or really our age) is a miracle |
Bob, one day??? no this girl has the talent now!! i have read a lot of poems but yours seemed to amaze me so much at only 13!! beautiful, elegant, heartfelt, touching....!! perfect |
by polly
this poem is blody amazing! truly inspiring.thankyou. my life wish also is to rid all bad for one day! but that day just never seems to come does it! polly xxx |