Excellent poem.. I really liked it and I'm glad you submitted it! =) As I get the time, I'll be reading more of your recently submitted poems, but lately I've been so busy with school.. :-( lol. Take care and keep writing!

~Grace

clever words- my poor lil' brain can't cope! very good though!

ps. thankyou for voting for my poem

i LOVE this...i love that you wrote a poem about the issues and hyppocritical preachings that are taught to us every day but never fulfilled. i appreciated the stance about marriage and women, that i can definetly understand. "speak to me not of morality for you work the beast's work" that line really summerizes what the whole piece of writing was about, i really admire and appreciate this poem, wonderful job.

awesome poem... creative and well worded. keep on writing...