Hey I liked the idea behind it, i thought the last lines though needed to broken up a bit, it didn't fit w/ the rest of the poem display. Other than that it was good :) Would you check out a lovers decite? Thanks...

i like the message this poem sends out and the different views on a person's life. we all do try our best, sometimes its just never enough. great poem!

Wow i really like the concept of this poem and the way it was written, really effective. It was beautiful! :P Keep up the good work, girl!

xox, PorteR

Great!! Simply great. Sort of prophetic, a mixture of confidence and insight. I like your thinking girlie!!

Another awesome poem and thanks for the comment

great! word flow could use a little work but other then that..GREAT!
hugs,blarg

I like the different perspectives in this poem...gives it some individuality

that was really good!! keep it up!! thanks for the comments!! :)