Wow i really like this poem. The reference towards the fire that's left and the way a lost love stays in your heart was really well done. 5/5!

Keep up the awesome work!

xox, PorteR

Hey- Thats awsome- great Talent!*5

-Luv KT

Amazing, wonderfully written. A straight 5. I love the way you handle the gears from start, an amazing opening, and a beautiful ending.

Keep writing. Thanks for your sweet comment on my poem.
Take care!!

Normally i would write you back an encouraging comment just because you commented on mine and i 'm trying to be nice, but in this instance i think that was a genuinely good poem. Language was beautiful and the idea of a ghost residing in an abandoned room/heart can be interpreted on many levels. The general mood and effect of the piece is perfect.

Awesome poem, you definately have away with words, keep up the good work.

you are a VERY talented writer!!
where do you get your ideas???
AWESOME!!
hugs AND kisses,blarg

:) Great poem

Awesome poem !!!!!!!!!!! keep writing ! you have talent !! Take care,
E.

Absolutely amazing, was so lovely and full of emotion, could really relate, well done

This is a very sweet poem, and very sad too. good work.

I've read worse teen love poems I 'll say that. I liked the first stanza, not bad for the subject at all.
I think the flow is lacking slightly in the second and third stanzas. I'm confused whether the "ghost" is metaphorical or literal, either way it seemed a bit of a cliche way to talk about the past memories. On the subject of cliche the "flame" is cliche too, put me off the final stanza.
Overall, it started well but the ending could have been better.