Very nice poem, I love the flow, the rhyme, and most of all, the message behind :) ...hmm... why didn't you make the last stenza rhyme?... but anyway, good work, keep it up and take care :)

thank you for ur comment!! what do u mean by the last stanza doesnt rhyme....ignored and hard...but thanks for voting reading and the comment..!!

nice poem ! i liked it !
keep on writing !

nice poem.. i really like it