yes. yes. no. no. yes. yes. yes. yes. wonderful poem! i like how the rhyming is set up in this style of poem. great job!

great poem, very well written. kepp it up!

Well done chicka this one's awesome! Like Andrea, i like the rhyming, it's clever.

Keep writing, you've got talent! =)

xox, PorteR

another great poem from you. keep writting and i'll keep reading.

great poem!!!!!! loved it!
love blarg

Very deep thoughts...Another great one! Keep it up~Holly