Great poem, Erin. I think either category is equally good.

As for it being free verse... I didn't really notice until I read your paragraph at the end... and that is the secret to making a good free verse poem... it flowed so well that it felt like it rhymed.

I'm going to send some suggestions in a private message...

Great work!!

~Ann

Excellent job, keep it up

excellent poem! i really like it especially the pattern. it's very emotional and i was like glued to the screen as i reading it. hehe. great job!

This poem is great, the describing words you use to describe the loss of this friend are just brilliant, as for it being free verse it really did flow brilliantly and it made it seem like it wasnt fee verse, excellent poem

Love, Peace and Empathy

Cantchangeme