by ŦÅüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ Nov 13, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
*This is a poem, I wrote for Remembrance day* |
This is great. Your good at putting yourself in their shoes and portraying what their feelings and reactions to situations are. Not many people can do that convincingly. You are a great great writer. |
very nice, the rhymes are good cuz they aren't obvious, they make sense in the sentences... great job! |
thank you for commenting on my poem...... you are good as well. i know, its amazing to me sometimes how bravery does go unnoticed...i would never have the courage it takes to go to war and other things...but i praise for all they have done. loves |