thank you for commenting on my poem...... you are good as well. i know, its amazing to me sometimes how bravery does go unnoticed...i would never have the courage it takes to go to war and other things...but i praise for all they have done. loves

very nice, the rhymes are good cuz they aren't obvious, they make sense in the sentences... great job!

This is great. Your good at putting yourself in their shoes and portraying what their feelings and reactions to situations are. Not many people can do that convincingly. You are a great great writer.
With love, K Kristina