Please take my life.

by lanie luvs u x3   Nov 13, 2004


All the pain you've caused
hurts so bad i want to cry
and other times the pain
makes me want to die

so i take the razor
blade and press it in
and i watch the red blood
flow from with in

every night when i go home
i take my razor blade
wishing and hoping that
my life will soon fade

my pains have caused
me not to sleep
so i take the blade
and press it in real deep

theres nothing i want except
for my life to end
theres no one left to
help me mend

I've tried everything to
try and make the pain stop
but now the razor blade
is all I've got

you don't know what its like
to fall asleep not wanting to wake
just waiting for death, your life to take.

^sorry that it's so short!^

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  • 20 years ago

    by lanie luvs u x3

    thank all of ya'll for your comment. there is no one in my life who cares right now and it would be great to talk to someone, but i want to talk to someone who understands what im going through right now. but thanks anyways. **CutAwayThePain**

  • 20 years ago

    by confusion

    short but stil great. sad message, but try 2 b strong, a happier day wil com in its chosen time. :)

    keep writing

    lu -x-x-x-x-

  • 20 years ago

    by deadnalone

    i do understand and i know its hard. try and let the cuts heal and you might find it harder to stop. there's always soembody out there who cares. im here to talk to if u need me just comment on summat of mine. from someone else who does the same. great poem by da way.

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