Feeling the Breeze

by ChildofGod87   Nov 13, 2004


The breeze that blows all of my pain away..
Sweet gentle wind that makes me shiver inside..
Feeling of someone's touch caressing my cheeks..
Breeze that embrace our fears
and makes them more alive..
I feeling the gentleness..
So wonderful.. So sweet..
That we would think that there's heaven shining
from up above us!

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  • 20 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Beautiful poem hun! =) I loved it! Take care of yourself and keep writing!

  • 20 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    thanx you guys...I really appeciate it:p

  • 20 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    thnx Marta & Jason:) *God Bless*

  • 20 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Another excellent poem, keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by Marta

    that was a really nice poem, beautiful and it flowed very good. creative and simple, and an enjoyment to read, keep it up :) x x

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