I really like this. One line in particular: "Roses red, Blood runs black" paints a bitter, but realistic, view. I like it.

Not bad...check out some of my stuff if you have a chance.

Awsome, you did a great job on this, at some places tho it seems you were trying too hard to rhyme maybe try a non rhyming poem! Still it was great keep it up!

wow! this is very exquisite poetry. it is so deep and honest. wonderful job!

good poem with great rhyming and a great theme... so, it is a great poem.

How appropriate!

excellent poem, great word choice.. i like the title

i love this poem, you did an excellent job writing it, it flowed extremely well, and i wouldnt change 1 word in it because it is amazingly written!
take care
Scooby

Hate and resentment infects us all, one way or another. Judgemental people need to look hard on theirselves, instead of pointing the finger at someone else. This poem was great! Thank you!

wow that was an awsome poem!!! i cant totally relate 2 it, ive felt that same way 4 like the past month or 2, well newayz it was great, keep writtin

I think this poem it was very well written. It was deep and had it's own unique style. Check out some of mine if u would! Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

Another very well done poem I really like your work and know that as you grow it will get increasingly better good job. Take care...

Very good poem! plz comment and vote on sum of my poems! thanx

great poem....as you probley guessed...

I really loved this poem hun! It was sooo beautiful and flowed great!
Love alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOX

Extremly true message given, with subtle but oddly blunt imagery...well done :)

Not bad,.. not bad at all. my only thought, really is that the only thing ur needing is more complex rhymes.. i dunn0, it just seems like these are all common ones,.. you use colorful language, so that area isnt what's lacking, its just the rhyming.. maybe try multisyllabic rhyming,.. thats always fun to play around with..

Lurking in the pit of my stomach, hatred slowly thrives,
Crawling all over my heart, stabbing sharp pointy knives.

ah what an image! loved it.. it made me visualize bee's buzzing over a honeycombed heart.. maybe add the bees or an allusion to them in a metaphor or something, somehow.. that'd be up to you and your creativity.. good read.. 4/5

Excellent work. this is really well done. (please read some of mine)