Ya lol I was sitting down thinking of many questions that are left unknown, so I had to write a poem of it lol (I write poems of everything that comes to my mind now lol) I just started writing poetry a couple days ago now I am hooked lol well i'll stop rambling on now lol... ok stop now shana...ok I stoped

hmm...it does make you think. great poem, tho!

creative, abd strange.... Oh my, it's not morbid... haha Keep up the good work

It's a reall good poem, but not dark. Just...probing.

suggestions:

1) line 2 of second stanza: a bit messy. try taking out the "really" sounds better

2) lines 1 and 3 in last stanza are basically the same... asking if something will be answered, then asking if it will be left unanswered is pretty much synonymous.

3) next time try to keep consistent with the number of words u have per line.. follow a pattern, like ABBA or ABAB.

what i LIKED:

1) i like the tone and my reader response was positive

2) this is very post-modern thinking

3) the moral of the story is...

^^my interpretation of the end. i like the open-endedness of it

I really love your writing, it really is wonderful! do you think you could rate some of my poems and give me some comments?