excellent poem, the writing is marvelous!

hehe another great poem you have brought us! good job, I love the flow of this one! (be sure to check out my new one "Was so Young")

hey, i like your style and passion; it's cool. great poem, and so are your others. keep up the good work. btw, thx for commenting on my poem. ;-)

Short, sweet and to the point. You really know hot to get the emotion across, and that's an honest comment. Awesome.

wow.. that poem was friggin awesome!! keep writing at all costs!!

i'd give it a '10' if i could *sigh* a '5' will have to do!
love blarg

dude you could easly become an arthor of a really neat book, i think you should seriously, if you have the chance.. check out mine and tell me how to improve

Another interesting take... I enjoy how you move the reader through another's experience, make it transferable, and then bring the reader into a recognition that this is not necessarily a "human" speaker, but you've understood the ride nonetheless.

nice work!!!

that was good, i could really bring the image of your poem in my mind, very good job
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Beauty and melancholy brought together. I couldn't ask for anything more magnificent.

Yet again another great piece!!!!!

i just wanted to let you know that a guy named "joe" stole your poem and unseen exposures poem. i already reported it but idk if theyre gonna do anythin about it so maybe if i get aenough people to complain about it they will....