great poem but that is so sad! i hope that never has to happen in real life because that is just awful.

This poem is not from personal experience, but it has happened many times before with kids and their parents guns. I honestly can't tell you where I got the inspiration for this poem, I don't even know...

Very nice Shana. Different from anything i've ever read before. Well done.

Awesome poem, you keep coming up with good ones, although it is sad, I liked it. Good Work

thanks for the comments everyone I really appreciate them! :) be sure to look at my others they are pretty good also...

I just wanted to say that I enjoy this poem and that you should keep on writing:) *Take Care* ^God Bless^
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Very heartfelt, very amazing, I loved it, very sad you are an amazing writer