awww.. that was no way rubbish, that's EXACTLY how I feel :( having all these "maybe"s suck big time... oh my this poem is great, really is, its like you took the thoughts from my mind and wrote it here... oh good work :) Keep them up girl, take care :)... wish you one day the maybe will lead to a happy ending :)

It is not rubbish...Writing is all about expressing yourself and your poetry is amazing!!!! You are such a great writer and beautiful person. I check back to see if you have new poems...... I enjoy reading your stuff....Anyway This is another 5 ....great job....Take Care

i do not think this is rubbish at all! you have written it very lovely!