The Game

by miaowmolly   Nov 14, 2004


This knife is back to stab again,
Each new wound is by a friend,
But our smiles we still pretend,
Our "Happy lives" will never end,

So its your turn pick up a knife,
And don't forget to be polite,
'Cuz angry faces cause a fight,
and no-one cares if its not right,

So play the game and watch your back,
friends are sly on their attack,
If your the one who dosent crack,
You will recieve your very own plaque,

entitled:"Best backstabber B%%%%"
and learn now your life you cannot switch,
act your part and play the witch,
all the plaques have made you rich.

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  • 12 years ago

    by acquisto alicia

    I love this poem. nice work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    damn. you got flows, ma. keep it up. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thanks for the comment and I'll give you an honest critique if you want it...

    Well I absolutely love the first stanza and it's a poem many can relate to, however, your rhyme scheme doesn't follow through well (which I did the same thing when I first started writing lol) To make your poems more enjoyable try a constant rhyme scheme such as ABAB, ABCB, ABCC, etc, you get me? lol otherwise, your writing is great especcially for beginners! keep writing, I see potential in you-5

    love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    oo, i like tht poem, its pretty, and btw thnx for commenting on my poem, i actually just added a new its called "Painted" read if you want

    keep writing

    XOXO
    Christina

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