oo, i like tht poem, its pretty, and btw thnx for commenting on my poem, i actually just added a new its called "Painted" read if you want

keep writing

XOXO
Christina

thanks for the comment and I'll give you an honest critique if you want it...

Well I absolutely love the first stanza and it's a poem many can relate to, however, your rhyme scheme doesn't follow through well (which I did the same thing when I first started writing lol) To make your poems more enjoyable try a constant rhyme scheme such as ABAB, ABCB, ABCC, etc, you get me? lol otherwise, your writing is great especcially for beginners! keep writing, I see potential in you-5

love Heather.

damn. you got flows, ma. keep it up. 5/5

I love this poem. nice work!