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by Danielle Nov 14, 2004 category : Love, romance / desired love
You shatter open the dark window pane and grab for the locked door once again you gaze at pictures that line the walls within reach into your pocket and wonder where to begin you slowly pull out the note from seasons past and think about the time you saw her last you kneel down, remembering old memories hoping to bring you back where you need to be Instead you flip open the knife and shred the letter As your mind races for the pain to get better you stumble and try to catch your breathing but inside you know the next one too will be leaving you make your way back to the door close it and lock it behind you once more
by Elizabeth Ann
Wonderful. You capture the reader from start to finish. For your poise is overwhelming. (5)