oh thats sad! very good poem though.

amazing poem love...it's really good...jsut one piece of critism (or however you spell it...) you should make it a little longer, if possible...but no worries....it's really marvelous...take care hun love you

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

ps. And you better not use death as a cure.....xxxx

sarah, thanks for the critism, ill try to fix it up and i wont as i promised
love from nick
-UnImportant

i thought it was great!!! and you better not use death as a cure cuz it will just cause more pain to the ppl who need u here!! and poem writing is a excellent cure to!!!