this one was going to be a song but I was to lazy to get music to it so I just changed it alittle and made it a poem

wen i was reading this poem i felt that i was in it. this was sooooo good. excellent a definate 5

i like this, it would make a great song! so what insturments do you play??? i play guitar! lol anyways awesome as usual, your a great poet. hugs n love-hayley-