Simply Morbid

by Shana   Nov 15, 2004


The angel of death
Is simply morbid
He takes your breath
Do you want me to tell you what he did?

He took me away
On a trip
I never lived another day
My tombstone says RIP

We crossed the black ocean
I never thought of all the mistakes
I was crying with much emotion
It just gives me the shakes

As we came to Hells land
I just wanted to faint
The devil gave me a hand
He then said that he was my saint

He pushed me down
He told me to get to work
He said it with a frown
He seems very berserk

I will go through this forever
I am in pain
Now I don't feel so clever
I will go insane

I did not mean to do the things I have done
I only thought of my wealth
Back then I thought it was fun
I have shamed myself

It is not hot in Hell as they say
It is cold and frigid
I am forced to stay
Can Hell get any more rigid?

I tried to jump back on the raft
I wanna go home
All he could do was laugh
For now I must spend eternity all alone

I should have known...

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  • 20 years ago

    by Shana

    o seriously lol I never check, I wonder what its at I must see lol, hehe, someone will probly vote me down anyway like people ussually do to take my spot lol

  • 20 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Hey Shana, you just bumped my poem down a spot on the Dark/Fantasy section.... Thanks a lot..
    jk... good job, and keep on writing

  • 20 years ago

    by Broken

    that was excellent!!!!! ah, i could picture everything ....very imaginative and very creative....keep up the beautiful work!

  • 20 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, keep up the good work... P.S. thanks for the comments and messages.

    Jason

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    this is really good! its different and creative. great job!